DAY & NIGHT

L.i. make interesting word choices.

in the day family & friends get together and play games and mothers chat at the park.

in the night house cats have catfights and the owner goes looking for them at the dark mysterious park

The fat dog ran chasing the cat down the road., splendid, scintillating  sentences!

Write your new sentence in blue font below the original sentence.

You may use a dictionary or thesaurus to help you find words.

The cat sat on a wall.

Patiently, the old cat waited on the garden wall

The dog walked down the road.  The fat dog chased the cat down the road.

The fish swam in the bowl.
The ugly small fish was swimming in huge round bowl.

A mouse ate some cheese.
A smelly chubby rat munched some of my delicious   cheesecake.

A bird flew to a tree.
A beautiful coloured bird flew to a large tree.

I went to the shops.
I went to the small shop with expired food.


My mum said, “No.
My grandma with saggy skin said slowly no”.

My sister got a book.
My younger sister bought a small book.

Gran walked home.
Nana ran home happy .

I saw an elephant.
I saw a huge ugly fat smelly elephant .



John had a violin.
My friend Michael H had a budget violin from salvation army.

This is just to say

I have eaten

the ice-cream
that was
in the freezer

and which
you were probably
saving
for your dessert tonight.

Forgive me
it was delightful
so sugary
and freezing cold.

I asked the little boy who could not see

I asked the little boy who could not see

“And what is color like?”
“Why red,” said he,
“Is like sitting in front of the fire at my house.
Pouring rain on a cold day that is blue.
Yellow is like the warm sun that shines down over me.
Purple must be thunderclouds fighting in the sky.  
The forest where its nice and peaceful, that is like green.
Pink is like the sweet taste of lollies that we eat on birthdays.
White is the fog that I walk through on winter mornings.
And orange is the orange drink that I have before a rugby game.